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Saturday, May 22, 2010

Research

Sample Character

Character One
( We are going away)

Sam is a normal kid. He goes to a normal school with normal friends
but the only abnormal thing about him is that he is always moving. " Honey you
have to hurry we are about to leave" said, Sam's mom. "Okay mother." Sam didn't like to move because he would have to meet new friends and people. Sam lived with his cousin and brother. His cousin was David and his mother and father died in a car accident. Bob was his only and older brother, he had no sister. Bob and David love to travel especially in a car.

Sam and the rest of the crew starts to get in the car until David remembered he had a special that he had left in the house. That special think was
his father and mother picture. " Aunty I forgot something can I get it ." " Well of cousre you can." So David went to go get the picture and they was off.

Dramatic plot structure( Plot Outline )

I. Introduction
a. The setting of my story is going to be mostly on the road heading to Las Cruses, New Mexico. It takes place in different states and it is during the summer time.
b. The main characters are David,Bob,and Sam.
c. David,Sam,and Bob might get in some accidents with each other and other stuff.
II. Rising action
a. Sam is 14 and he is celebrating at a hotel and he meets a hot girl during his birthday!!! She is the same age and same height.
b. Sam really wants a kiss from the girl and he thinks the girl likes him. Sam wants to kiss her because he had never kiss a girl and he really likes her. They both care about each other even though they just meet. Also they have similar sports that they like.

III. Climax
a. The most important event in the story is when Sam might get a kiss, when Bob,Sam,and David gets into a accident, and when Sam celebrates his birthday.
b. Sam,David,and Bob gets into a accident and they all blame each other for doing it.

IV. Falling action
a. The results of the climax is that they don't talk to each other and that they all get lost for not helping each other out.
b. Sam:is very very angry at David and Bob.
Bob: not talking to David and upset that Sam is his brother.
David: upset that he has to go on the trip with them and live with them.
V. Resolution
a. Sam,David,and Bob learned that if they don't care for each other they wont be a family and if they are not a family what are they? It affected them because now they are heading to New Mexico how
b. For now the kids will live together and be a happy family. Later they will celebrate Sam birthday and Sam finds out that he is neighbors with the girl he might or might not kiss.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Pitch

Hi my name is Bilih Brown and I am going to tell about the story I am going to make. The novel that I am going to make is going to be called " Sam's adventure." It is going to be the best novel that was ever made. My novel are going to have four main characters but Sam is the most important character.

The characters are David, Bob,and Sam. David is Sam's cousin and Bob is Sam's brother. Sam is 13 turning 14. Bob is 16 and David is 14 years old. These characters are going to make my novel popular because they are going to attract all of the 6th graders and even my other teachers. This is a Pitch about my novel bye.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Character Biography

The main character of my story is Sam Tucker. Sam is 13 and he is moving to Las Cruses, New Mexico. Sam right now lives in Lake Wood,New Jersey and has a long way to go. Sam is going to turn 14 in a couple of weeks. Sam is the youngest child in his family. The setting of the story is in Las Cruses and in Lake Wood,New Jersey. Sam might not be able to celebrate his birthday with his family because they are going to be in the middle of no where.

Sam is very close to Las Cruses and they have two days to his birthday. Sam wants to be able to be in Las Cruses and he wants to be at his new home because he is tried and he wants to see the house.

The most important event in the story is going to be when tries to kiss a girl for the very first time. Will he kiss her or will he get a big fat slap for trying to kiss a girl that doesn't. I think that Sam is not going to get the kiss but he is not going to get a slap. This is a character biography.

Friday, January 15, 2010

Feature Article (2nd Draft)

"What's for lunch?"
Many kids have different opinion about school lunch. Children say school lunch is healthy and delicious. On the other hand, many kids believe it is unhealthy. New York City Public School is working hard to turn school lunch healthy.
"The government is trying to make our school lunch healthy", said a mother that is 34 years old. School lunch needs more fruits, veggies, and whole grain. They are lowering the calories of the lunches. In my school they offer whole wheat bread.
A 13 years old boy said, "today overweight chilidren outnumber undernourished childern." The government wants veggies and more whole grains. They tryed updating the food pyramid so it can effect healthy eating habits. Overweighted childern need to eat whole grain so they can lose weight.
Kids, such as myself should be consuming the right amount of food."Lunch should be no more than 650 to 850 calories", said a boy on the bus. Consuming this amount they would not offered us. "The government wants kidsnto be offered 9 to 13 serving of grains for lunch", said a uncle in Canda. This will help school lunch become very healthy and even keep kids healthy.

Friday, November 20, 2009

Question for Feature Articles

1. How do you feel about domestic violence ?Why?
2. Did domestic violence happen to you ?
3. Would you do hurt someone ?
4. Did you see domestic violence ?
5. Do you know anyone who got hurt ?
6. Who hurt you and Why ?
7. What is the reason you got hurt ?
8. If you got hurt can you tell me how
they hurt you ?
9. Many people get hurt how do
you feel ?
10.